April's Winning Story



Crackers

by

Faith Cobaine

 

She lived in one of the tower-blocks on the ground floor – Abingdon Court. Hers was the flat with a council-blue front door and a tiny, two-stride-long garden. There was a ceramic snail in the window-box and a red plastic windmill in one of the daffodil pots by the Home Sweet Home doormat. Her name was Joan, or June. Or maybe, Joyce – no one was sure.


Every morning at 6am, she walked around the estate three times – whatever the weather. Thin ankles in thin-soled shoes, a headscarf tied beneath her chin. She threw mittened-hands to the heavens as though in some spectacular gesture, before scurrying along next to the curb. Around and around. She stooped to pick up cigarette-ends or crisp-packets and put them in her pocket. She muttered, but never made eye contact with anyone. If people talked to her, she seemed not to hear.
Away with the fairies, people concluded. Someone said she hummed to herself. Once she was heard singing, but the tune was unrecognisable.

One morning, a Monday, after her usual three laps, she was seen in the stairwell of the twenty-story block. With a licked-tissue, she wiped graffiti.

Crackers, that one, voices said of her.


Clutching the handrail, she shuffled both feet onto each step, pausing for breath, before continuing. By lunchtime she’d reached the twelfth floor.


Why’s she going upstairs – who does she know up there
? someone said. Why doesn't she use the lift?


People huddled in doorways.
Daft bat, they said, leaving her to her own devices.

Eccentricity’s a privilege of old-age, another said, trying to sound wise.

By 2pm she’d reached the top floor. No one guessed she’d go onto the roof. They thought it was an extension to her exercise regime. No one thought she’d step off, even as her frailty swayed close to the edge. Afterwards, word went round – yes we saw her up there – we thought she was dancing.




Copyright (c) Faith Cobaine 2011


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April's Runner-up


Pandora's Toybox

by

Jack Noble

 

Malcolm, sit down.

I just received a phone call from your teacher. He was crying. Can you tell me why?

That’s right, it’s because of what happened to Brian. But he’s not very clear about what did happen to Brian. I was hoping you could tell me. Mr Fish said you were playing with Brian before it happened. He said you were playing with a toy. Which toy, dear?

Don’t shrug, Malcolm, it’s most unsightly. Mr Fish said he asked you to give him the toy and you ran away. Is that true?

I don’t doubt you were scared, darling. Mr Fish was scared too. And poor Brian’s mother, well, I can only imagine. But Malcolm, you must understand that the police will be here any minute. They will want to speak to you. So I think it’s better that you tell me what happened first.

Let’s make it easier: tell me just one thing. What happened to Brian’s hands?

Malcolm, where are Brian’s hands?

If you shrug again, Malcolm dear, Mummy is going to get mad.

We don't want to stop you playing with your toys. No, we won’t stop you making them, either. Have we ever? Even though, the filthy junk you bring home to make them, God knows where you get it from. Yes, I know you always wash your hands, of course you do, you’re a very good boy. What I’m saying, dear, is that we support you. No one is going to stop you making your toys.

Yes, I promise. Remember Mrs. Fogerty’s spaniel? Oh, don’t give me that, young man, you remember very well. That strange contraption of yours, made of paperclips and batteries and smelly old twigs. Well, okay, whatever it was made of. Don’t make fun of Mummy’s ignorance. There’s a world of things that I do know about, don’t you worry about that. What? Oh, you fibber! That thing was certainly not harmless, not for that poor dog. I leave you alone in the garden with little Sparky for five minutes, and what happens? The dog mysteriously vanishes and we can’t get your clothes clean for love or money! And what did we say when Mrs Fogerty came round looking for Sparky?

That’s right. Nothing. Because we love you.

And the rest of the world can go burn in hell.

You hear that car? It must be the police. Listen Malcolm, time is short. You know the rule about never taking out your toys when we have visitors? Forget that. And forget what I said just now about Mummy’s ignorance. Mummy’s not smart enough to take care of this by herself.

Go on: open your toybox.

Oh, so that’s the new one? Doesn’t look like much; but I know better.

They’re here. Get ready. No house rules today; you do whatever you want. Just promise to help me clean up later. Here, give me a kiss.

Just coming!

Hello, officers. Come on in. Oh, I wouldn’t bother wiping your feet.  

Copyright (c) Jack Noble 2011



April's third-placed story



The House on Memory Lane

by

Brian G. Ross
 

 

She burns while she sleeps.

Crimson shutters cover her eyes; mouth is closed where screams once escaped. Flames flicker like crazy orange tongues, licking old wounds, whispering. Childhood ghosts talk to me: talk about me. I listen, but all I can hear is the crackle of the reds and yellows, the snap of wood and glass, and roof tiles like popcorn, as my past begins to crumble under the night sky.

Soon those sirens will be here.

One window at a time, the street lights up, awakening to the lynching of a past they do not even know. I see faces I have not seen for many years. Most do not remember me, but some do, the little boy with the cute smile.

I stare into the flames and lose myself in its golden embrace. I can see the face of my father, perhaps aroused by the black smell, or the approaching hooves of his own demise. I catch the stench of daddy-sweat on the breeze, although the stink has never really left my nostrils. The wind throws the blaze left and right, then back again, in a dirty dance of power and rage.

My father’s tattoo of fists and feet against the front door becomes the shriek of a thousand sleepless nights, that only now can I begin to close my eyes upon. It is a sweet refrain to my sombre song. To my ears it sounds like justice.

I cup the cigarette - my hand no longer trembling - and strike another match. I drag long and hard, and exhale twenty-three years of purple-hazed guilt.

People always tell me I am like my father - same wispy hair, same thoughtful eyes.

Same loving hand.

Mrs Appleby tugs at my sleeve; Mr Bristow yells at me from across the street. But it’s all too late now. I cannot hear their pleas as many years ago they could not hear mine.


I think about my own son, tucked up in bed, where only an hour before I had given little Trent the same daddy-kisses my father had given me all those years ago. I wonder if he will grow up as I have - with fire in his heart and flames in his future.

Sometimes the choices you make are not your own.

Sometimes all you do is light the fuse and watch it burn.

My eyes wet with tears for the last time, I drop the dead match to the ground, and walk away.




Copyright (c) Brian G. Ross 2011